Talaram's Stories/Poems

Deleted Deleted Member Posts: 0	Talaram's Stories/Poems Sept 20, 2013 7:19:37 GMT -7 via the ProBoards App Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on Sept 20, 2013 7:19:37 GMT -7 very taking and deep. I love it.

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Talani Bawwss The main boss c: Floating on rainbows and eating butterflies. Posts: 77	Talaram's Stories/Poems Sept 20, 2013 17:54:00 GMT -7 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Talani on Sept 20, 2013 17:54:00 GMT -7 Yusyus. c;
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Talaram's Stories/Poems Sept 20, 2013 20:52:06 GMT -7

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~ ~ ~ Did ya notice? ~ ~ ~

Babyeh, did ya notice
That you're my guiding light
From the pit known as hell
Shining light, oh glistening light

Oh babyeh, did ya notice
how I treated you every day
No matter the situation
I always treated you right

Babyeh, I hope ya noticed
Cause this would've been for naught
All these non-ending attempts
To steal your heart away

Babyeh, did ya notice
My eternal love for you that shall never fade
No matter what, my undying love
Shall remain, even If I fade from this existence

Oh babyeh, You've got to notice
I'll never leave your side
Whatever cost it is, I'll gladly pay
Only to be with you ever longer.

Talani Bawwss The main boss c: Floating on rainbows and eating butterflies. Posts: 77	Talaram's Stories/Poems Sept 20, 2013 21:05:14 GMT -7 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Talani on Sept 20, 2013 21:05:14 GMT -7 Coot. <3
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Talaram's Stories/Poems Sept 22, 2013 4:41:44 GMT -7

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I really like the last one

"the threads get shorter" is a perfect reference to the Greek myth that when someone dies a thread in the underworld has been cut...whether intentional or not, it made me think. I really like your poetry! Also: "Eternal blanket of darkness"... Human oblivion...

Once again, Awesome writing!

Deleted Deleted Member Posts: 0	Talaram's Stories/Poems Sept 22, 2013 9:27:54 GMT -7 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on Sept 22, 2013 9:27:54 GMT -7 Thanks a lot Kiri. It does mean a lot see how well everyone loves my poems. Though, I didn't know about the greek reference of the underworld deaths. xDD

Deleted Deleted Member Posts: 0	Talaram's Stories/Poems Sept 23, 2013 0:04:36 GMT -7 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on Sept 23, 2013 0:04:36 GMT -7 -le shrug- Even better! It means you came up with it all with your imagination! -reads through poems again- I like them XD

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Talaram's Stories/Poems Sept 23, 2013 18:09:41 GMT -7

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~ ~ ~ Untitled ~ ~ ~
I'm lost, in this world of war.
Endless killing, suffering, such agony.
All of us suffer such things
To serve our damn country.

I lay in this ditch, with my trusted rifle.
Mourning for my fallen friends.
They died for me, and our country.
So much death, should I continue?

Maybe giving up everything would be best.
No more suffering, death, perhaps.
I can't keep going, the pain's too great.
I could end this all with just one bullet.

Would my friends want that?
Would my country want that?
No, They'd want me to keep going
And protect our great country.

I'll press on the attack, for my fallen friends
I'll press on the enemy, for my commander
I'll destroy their base, for my country.
I'll keep going, and serve my country

For I am a soldier of USA
Others don't understand what that means
But I do, for I'm an american soldier
I will protect and fight for my land, my pride, and my friends.

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Now, at the ending of this poem/story/thingie.. I would just like to say, R.I.P for all those who died serving America.. God bless USA.. :3

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Talani Bawwss The main boss c: Floating on rainbows and eating butterflies. Posts: 77	Talaram's Stories/Poems Sept 23, 2013 19:23:29 GMT -7 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Talani on Sept 23, 2013 19:23:29 GMT -7 Amazing hunnzz.
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Kaya Newbie Posts: 4	Talaram's Stories/Poems Sept 23, 2013 20:04:22 GMT -7 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kaya on Sept 23, 2013 20:04:22 GMT -7 Awesome poems you've written there Talaram! Keep up the good work.

Deleted Deleted Member Posts: 0	Talaram's Stories/Poems Sept 23, 2013 21:03:53 GMT -7 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on Sept 23, 2013 21:03:53 GMT -7 Thank you! :3

Deleted Deleted Member Posts: 0	Talaram's Stories/Poems Sept 24, 2013 16:21:28 GMT -7 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on Sept 24, 2013 16:21:28 GMT -7 It is the war poem O-o It is really, really good "I'm lost in this world of war". I don't know a whole lot about the USA soldiers. But thank you for this poem~

Deleted Deleted Member Posts: 0	Talaram's Stories/Poems Sept 25, 2013 6:49:13 GMT -7 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on Sept 25, 2013 6:49:13 GMT -7 Thanks.. and I made it up, I don't know how they feel either. xD

Rhea: My account was deleted from FH guys. I will try to make another one but I have to wait until registration is open again. I added you on my other account Tally. Nov 17, 2013 20:37:18 GMT -7

Talaram |: Through the endless amount of time spent away (And getting shot >_>) (This is going to sound sad I know.) I have never RPed in a group that was more enjoyable than this one. My time Rping in Exstinctio led me to meet these friends of mine. I'm just -- Feb 11, 2014 16:37:47 GMT -7

Talaram |: saying that you people are awesome, and that I miss you all. I doubt this will be read, but I just felt the need to anyway, incase someone would see. Miss you peeps and I deeply hope I can reconnect with you all. Take care all of ya.

Feb 11, 2014 16:39:38 GMT -7